What you posted was very reasonable. However, consider this, what if you added a little information? I am not saying your content isn't solid, however what if you added a headline that makes people want more? I mean %BLOG_TITLE% is kinda plain. You might glance at Yahoo's front page and see how they create post titles to get viewers interested. You might add a video or a pic or two to get readers excited about what you've got to say. Just my opinion, it could bring your posts a little livelier.